heyya
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When talked about my first date, what was across in my mind is nil. I do not have any first date in my life because I never really think about it. First date usually was set up for someone we love or special in our life. So, for a girls like me I surely if a first date is talked about it should goes with a boy. But unfortunately I do not have any memories about it. This all because I believe ‘love after marriage’ is the best. Nevertheless, after my lecture asked to write it, I try to imagine what would be in my first date. I think it would be a whole day first date for me as I love to go for a walk. I would like to have a great day together.
I prefer to go to the theme park so we can do an activity while we walk and chat. We could play many challenging rides such as roller coaster, pirate ship, screaming swing and many others. I also will bring the camera so we could capture the moment together. After sharing the fear and laugh together, I will bring him to the beach where the place we can relax our mind by enjoying the music of nature. There, I will take out my special dishes that I prepared even though my cook was not great as my mother cooks. Next, we will chat about our interest to know each other deeper and view the waves pounding the beach until we feel want to go back home.
that's all for today....
until meet again
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Uuuuuu..so sweeeeeeeeetttt ^____________^ LIKE this part :
"bring him to the beach where the place we can relax our mind by enjoying the music of nature."
hope u'll find the true love. ^^ enjoy this entry. ;)
When I HAVE TO TALK about my first date, what was across in my mind WAS nil. I do not have any first date in my life because I HAD never really think about it. First date usually was set up for someone we love or special in our life. So, for a GIRL like me I AM VERY SURE THAT A DATE SHOULD BE WITH A BOY. But unfortunately I do not have any SINGLE MEMORY about it. ITS because I believe THAT ‘love after marriage’ is the best. Nevertheless, after my LECTURER asked ME to write ABOUT it, I HAVE TRIED to imagine what would be in my first date. I think it would be a MY FIRST CATE WILL HELD FOR A WHOLE DAY as I love to go for a walk. I would like to have a great day together WITH MY DATE.
I prefer to go to the theme park so we can do A LOT OF ACTIVITIES while we walk and chat. We could RIDE SOMETHING CHALLENGING such as roller coaster, pirate ship, screaming swing and many MORE. I WILL ALSO bring the camera so we could capture the moment together. After sharing the FEARS and LAUGHS together, I will bring him to the beach, A PLACE WHERE we can relax our mind by enjoying the music of nature. There, I will take out my special DISH that I HAVE prepared even though my COOKING IS NOT AS great as my MOTHER'S. Next, we will TALK about our INTERESTS to know MORE ABOUT EACH OTHER WHILE VIEWING the waves pounding the beach BEFORE WE GOT BACK HOME.
p/s : sayang,,,I've fixed d errors,,,with capital letters....but please double-check it with someone with better English than me before u submit it...anyway...good job!
anisyafrina:haha....i think i know why~
syazwani mazlan:aha~thanx a lot 4 ur prayer...amin!hehehe....
najmi:
whoah a lot of mistake that i did???
thnx najmi....
a lot....
toche2,,xie2,,arigatou,,terima kasih,,dlm arab lupa lak...hahaha....
insyallah t paen tnye lecture mr. gopal!!!hahaha....
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